Another Drabble

Interesting times.

I have business cards now, which is awesome, I’m working on a few articles, which I’ll try and narrow down and actually finish in the near future. My attention does tend to wander.

Until then, here’s another drabble, for SCIENCE!

One-Millimetre Journal

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A Drabble, you say?

A drabble… I’m not exactly sure where it comes from, is a format for fiction which is exactly 100 words (not including the title). It can’t be any more or less than one hundred.

When I was younger, I used to hate deadlines and restrictions. As silly as it sounds, the hypothetical comic company my best friend Adam and I had (Awesome Comics, later El Queso Diablo Comics) had a certain level of deadlines. I’d try and finish a script by a certain time. We wanted to be a proper publisher one day, like Marvel and DC. We were 13 years old, so that wasn’t likely to happen. Still, I made 30+ scripts. I was on fire, even though the second I had a deadline I did something else. Even through college I was allergic to deadlines. All those scripts are gone now, all that college work. Everything of my writing which I’d types up before I was 20 vanished when a laptop so damaged by its exposure to me, was rendered completely worthless, was burgled from my home.

Instead of being a sad occasion, this became a changing point. I started again from scratch. I didn’t look back. Over the next few years I grew to love deadlines. I relished them. These restrictions and rules. If I am going to write for one of the big comic companies then I’ll need to learn to write what other people want, I’ll need to write to a deadline.

Exercises like a drabble, writing to exactly a hundred words, are good to play with. I liken this to writing a comic script to make what is effectively an act break at the end of each issue. To making a dramatic beat preferrable at each turn of the page.

These preceeding statements are to explain that I am going to be posting a couple of drabbles for a couple of weeks. My plan is to have some bigger fiction up here before I run out of drabbles, but I have things to write, things to edit.

I hope you enjoy the first of these drabbles, short though they are.

Undone

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Tiny Broken Doll Face Man

I want to say, “Blame Chuck Wendig”. I really do.
Chuck Wendig is a writer, someone I’m a big fan of and whose advice on editing, “Welcome to Editordome” I’ve been returning to again and again while pouring through the proofreading copy of my novel.

He’s been doing contests on his webite, the aptly-named, Terrible Minds, for flash fiction. I’ve seen a couple where an idea didn’t come to me in time. The latest contest was this one, where the inspiration had to be a photo of doll’s heads. I started pondering ideas and had nothing.

Then yesterday this appeared to me at work, out of the blue. My proofreaders, Alex and Steve were great at rushing through it and now it’s ready to be viewed by the public. As much as it can be.

I want to say “Blame Chuck Wendig“, but this is my fault, really.

My latest Faked Tale, Tiny Broken Doll Face Man.

Enjoy.

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The Magical Laundrette

A bit of a swift one this week. The Magical Laundrette, or it might end up called “Where all the socks go”. I’m not sure yet. It’s kind of rough, so any constructive criticism is welcome.
As I’m running a little low on existing fiction, I’m thinking I’ll spend the next few weeks putting up something tiny in the form of drabbles I have done. I’ll use this time to hopefully build up a little more work, edit a few more pieces.
The weekly deadline’s been good, but I’ve also got a novel to edit, comic scripts to write the pitches for. It’s been a fun, busy time.

Charlie E/N

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Performance

Here’s another post-apocalyptic tale, The Performance.

Enjoy.

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Love’s Headlights

It’s new story time. Well, not really new as this was my first ever short story, involving a strange love triangle.

I hope you enjoy Love’s Headlights.

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The Break Up

Another part of my series about life after the end of the world, and fulfilling a decision made before the apocalypse, The Break Up.

I hope you enjoy it.

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View From The Hill

It’s a day late, but here’s another short story.

A few years ago I was at work and it was snowing. The isolation of an office with only a handful of people inside, nothing outdoors but white, my mind went back to a bunker I’d seen on a walk on the South Downs, and the isolation there.

I have written post apocalyptic stories, but this isn’t part of that series. Oddly, years apart, this is one of two stories with the line, “What if it’s zombies,” which probably shows where my mind is at. I have kept both, and hope they both work on their own merit.

I hope you enjoy, View From The Hill.

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Baba Yaga’s Bungalow


Only a tiny tale at the moment. I’m having a couple of days to enjoy immersing myself in editing the novel. I’m going to have time to edit some of my existing, larger short stories, and have a bunch I want to write up. in the near future.

Instead, here’s a little bit of strangeness which popped up in my head from nowhere. I hope you enjoy Baba Yaga’s Bungalow.

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One hundred and four

That’s it, Script Frenzy’s done. A month which felt like forever, writing-wise, and no time at all, in normal terms. I’ve managed to maintain some of my social life while hermitting away on my balcony. This year I had even less holiday to take for the Frenzy and still managed to hit the deadline. I ended with a hundred and four pages, only just more than my required hundred, but I have things to do.

My current plan for the comics is to work on the pitches for each of the four series, which shouldn’t take too long, maybe as a Monday’s work in the next month. Then look on sites, Comixology and the like, perhaps, post the first few pages to see if I can hook in any artists who might work well with it.

The next thing on the agenda, writing-wise, is to edit the novel. It took three months to proofread, so I’m giving myself three months to make the changes I’ve noted down. I’ve missed the characters and the setting of the novel, which is hopefully a good sign.

I have had issues with genre lately, being that it fits a bunch of different genres and for ease of use, I’ve just had it down as a “Young Adult novel”. This month, as well as editing Lightning, I’m going to read a few YA novels. I’ve grown a bit disillusioned with the genre after a few books went down badly. I’d reached a point of thinking to myself, “Do all YA books have no plot at all, because if that’s the case, then I’m not writing a YA book.” I know, or at least I hope, this is a crass generalisation. In a party last night, discussing the tone of my book, I mentioned that it was a YA book for adults. A vast amount of YA books have a large adult following, possibly as large as the youth audience. People frown on genre fiction, while ‘literary’ fiction has grown just as formulaic and somehow even more po-faced. So the ghetto of YA seems like it’s actually a good bridge between the two. You get historical fiction, sci-fi, teen drama aping the problems of literary fiction (albeit with far less mid-life crises). So it appears to be a good place to be, from an outside perspective.

Then you look at some of the novels in it. I’m not going to lie and say I don’t want Lightning to be the next Harry Potter or Twilight, popularity-wise. I do, and hopefully that’s fine. I’m aware of my problems with Twilight, at least, and Harry Potter’s one of the books I’m actually putting myself through this month, just to see what’s right, what’s wrong, and if I genuinely do fit in this niche area. I don’t expect much, but hope to be surprised. Somehow. The other books I’ve got lined up from the genre are:

Skellig, which is a borrowed book and therefore should have been read a year or two ago when I first got it. I’ve got no idea about what it is, other than I think there was a tv version at some point.

The Subtle Knife. I was crashing at my brother’s and read the entire last half of Northern Lights from when I woke up until he woke up. We’d had a lot to drink, been up late, but I woke up early just out of habit. So when we wandered around Greenwich, looking for breakfast, I charged into a second hand book store and got a copy of The Subtle Knife. Then I promptly forgot to read it for ages. I’ve heard almost all people who know me and know His Dark Materials say to me that it’s the one I’ll love the most. That it’s a great piece of work. So that I’m saving for last, my prize for getting through Harry Potter’s first book and whatever Skellig will have to offer.

As far as indicative texts on teen media go, I’ve already read Twilight, in case people have that as a recommendation, for whatever ungodly reason they’d do that. That’s a horrible, strange tale for another time. I’ll just say I wasn’t impressed and get onto the hyperbolising later. For those who haven’t heard of it. I envy you.

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